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Thursday, November 29, 2007

HNT - TiT - Time To Bale


Terror in Toyland (TiT) - An HNT Adventure
by Mark Leslie


Continued from this post

As the hay was hurling down towards Mark's head, he took a deep breath, thought about what his hero Spider-Man might say in a time like this and, leaping to the side, said: "Time to bale!"

He just narrowly managed to jump out of the way of the falling doom of hay, surprised to notice that, in mid flight his underwear miraculously changed back from the heart shaped ones to the original Spider-Man underwear he'd been wearing at the beginning of this adventure.

"Wow, talk about really bad continuity in this storyline," Mark thought, when he heard a cackle from around the back of the barn.

"My hay didn't get you, but my tractor never misses!"

It was Farmer Jones, driving his tractor and hell bent on finishing Mark off.


To be continued . . .

[
Congratulations to Ameratis whose comment suggestion was used to help write this chapter in the story - Ameratis, your signed copy of One Hand Screaming is on its way]


8 comments:

tkkerouac said...

And this is why, we must always place close attention to the underwear we are wearing...
Happy HNT!

smarmoofus said...

Inconsistencies just gives IMDB something to talk about when you make the film version.

Happy HNT! Ask me about my potato porn (a.k.a. Bondage Barbie) some time. Or just go google it and find the hit that lists it that way. (Warning: if it were people, it would be rated NC-17)

Lapis Ruber said...

It's just one darn thing after another.:-) Happy HNT.

lime said...

lol, congrats to ameratis! very clever comment. another fine chapter in this suspenseful tale (even if it lacks in continuity )

HHNT

Zoely said...

LMAO this is so awesome. Love love love it!
HHNT!

S said...

Behind the barn, Susie hides with a satisfied smile, and congratulates herself for bringing along to TIT, Little Ritas stash of play money, for it took but one play twenty to bribe Farmer Jones......
She watches the action from behind the horses ass.

HHNT Mark! :P

searabbit said...

You are so funny!
HHNT!

BTExpress said...

Underwear? Who needs them?

Excellent choice for the comment! And thanks for the ebook. Happy HNT!